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Title: 3 of my bands tracks, new demo...
Post by: Mr Ed on February 05, 2008, 02:03:01 PM
Figured I may as well put these here, I've put them on my other forum (Foo Fighters postboard)... these tracks are gonna be burned to a demo I'm giving out at our gig this weekend.

01. In Her Eyes (http://download.yousendit.com/7DA883526B07C8E7)

02. September (http://download.yousendit.com/EDCBD05C589B65F5)

03. Some Things Look Better (http://download.yousendit.com/5F0CE6D05B916440)

I apologise for:

~ The drums sounding a bit poo, the in-studio kit wasn't great.
~ The bass sounding a bit like ass.
~ The vocals sounding a bit ass at times.

I however do not apologise for the couple of bum notes that I hit, they were totally deliberate.  :wink:

EDIT: They're also now uploaded to our MySpace page (http://www.myspace.com/endever101) with the recently finish artwork that my mate did for us.
Title: 3 of my bands tracks, new demo...
Post by: Mr Ed on February 08, 2008, 03:49:31 PM
34 views and not one single reply?

Weak.
Title: 3 of my bands tracks, new demo...
Post by: Jonny on February 08, 2008, 04:29:27 PM
I'm not very good @ critising, but if you want a reply at least, here goes:

In Her Eyes:

1. GOOD lyrics!
2. Bass was good but to me, I think you could do something more with it.
3. None of it sounded like ass.

PDT_003

September:

Sadly, this is my least favourite for the vocals. The solo was good, and the intro reminded me of Nirvana, lol..
Title: 3 of my bands tracks, new demo...
Post by: _tom_ on February 08, 2008, 06:05:39 PM
I'm no expert but the mix sounds way off to me on the first track, I can hardly hear any drums and the vocals seem too loud. Guitar sounds a bit thin as well :( Mix on the 2nd track seems better though so far.