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Forum Ringside => Players => Topic started by: Bob Gnarly on September 14, 2012, 05:20:30 PM

Title: Rock guitar instrumental (Really good, honest ;) Go on, you will Father ;)
Post by: Bob Gnarly on September 14, 2012, 05:20:30 PM

Please rate my tune.
I think it's good, but I'm aware I could be wrong :)

Snake (Yo Asp) (http://westhillguitarstudio.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2012/09/snake-yo-asp.mp3)

Title: Re: Rock guitar instrumental (Really good, honest ;) Go on, you will Father ;)
Post by: Tellboy on September 15, 2012, 08:56:12 AM

You're right  ...... very good PDT_003

Title: Re: Rock guitar instrumental (Really good, honest ;) Go on, you will Father ;)
Post by: itamar101 on September 15, 2012, 09:50:56 AM

The Rythm Track was excellent... The lead, whilst displaying excellent technique, weren't very fitting in my opinion...
They would have benefited from a steve vai-esque melody line before going into the fast parts... from the middle on it was excellent though.

Just my opinion :)

Title: Re: Rock guitar instrumental (Really good, honest ;) Go on, you will Father ;)
Post by: Bob Gnarly on September 15, 2012, 10:40:41 AM

Thanks for listening and commenting guys. I really appreciate it.
I'm not normally one to go for speed over melody, but this tune just made me wanna rip. (as best I can)
It makes me feel hyper active, and bouncy :D

Title: Re: Rock guitar instrumental (Really good, honest ;) Go on, you will Father ;)
Post by: itamar101 on September 15, 2012, 11:06:02 AM

Quote from: Bob Gnarly on September 15, 2012, 10:40:41 AM

Thanks for listening and commenting guys. I really appreciate it.
I'm not normally one to go for speed over melody, but this tune just made me wanna rip. (as best I can)
It makes me feel hyper active, and bouncy :D

I totally get you. Those speed licks totally ripped :)
I just think that 20 seconds of some form of "melodic home ground/chorus" would have worked nicely.

Anyway, great instrumental.

Title: Re: Rock guitar instrumental (Really good, honest ;) Go on, you will Father ;)
Post by: gordiji on September 15, 2012, 08:13:54 PM

v.good indeed bob. lovely tone on your rythym track and very musical soloing even if indulgent.best i've heard here.

Title: Re: Rock guitar instrumental (Really good, honest ;) Go on, you will Father ;)
Post by: Bob Gnarly on September 15, 2012, 08:51:58 PM

Thanks very much dude :D

Title: Re: Rock guitar instrumental (Really good, honest ;) Go on, you will Father ;)
Post by: dave_mc on September 15, 2012, 09:27:23 PM

very nice playing there :)

Title: Re: Rock guitar instrumental (Really good, honest ;) Go on, you will Father ;)
Post by: Irun Toh on September 15, 2012, 10:08:11 PM

Very cool!  Sounds great

Title: Re: Rock guitar instrumental (Really good, honest ;) Go on, you will Father ;)
Post by: wisteria on September 25, 2012, 02:47:33 AM

This must be looking for professionals to help you.Or will affect the performance effects.

Title: Re: Rock guitar instrumental (Really good, honest ;) Go on, you will Father ;)
Post by: shredomatic on November 27, 2012, 01:28:02 PM

Nice job man.  The melodic/harmonic content from 45-1:15ish is especially cool.  Didn't catch what pickup where you using for the lead work? Did I miss it?

Title: Re: Rock guitar instrumental (Really good, honest ;) Go on, you will Father ;)
Post by: TheyCallMeVolume on November 27, 2012, 03:15:56 PM

Yup, you were right, it's good!

Title: Re: Rock guitar instrumental (Really good, honest ;) Go on, you will Father ;)
Post by: Jack on December 02, 2012, 04:43:59 PM

Your soloing is kickass man.

Title: Re: Rock guitar instrumental (Really good, honest ;) Go on, you will Father ;)
Post by: AnneLay on December 11, 2012, 12:00:37 PM

It was good. I would like to know that whether it was your first creation or you have created many tunes before. Do share them.

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Post by: alias7 on January 26, 2013, 11:37:08 AM

Great great great!!! Do an album, I'll buy it!!!