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Title: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
Post by: Plenum n Heather on February 20, 2014, 01:51:11 AM
A year of hard work and a 21 hour mix session to get Side 1 of my upcoming album complete!! But it's done and mastered now. Here's the rough assembly of Side 1.

This is a LOOONG one, so get a beer or something before playing it. :)

https://soundcloud.com/as-follows/the-eye-of-fire-and-fear-side


Lyrics -- (still working out some of the subtitles)

THE EYE OF FIRE AND FEAR
PART  I
________________________________________
a.   The Valley
Far away – as far at least
Lies the valley as the day
Down within the golden East
One and all, too far away

It is called the valley Nis:
And a Syriac tale there is
Satan’s dart
Angel wings
Broken heart
Unhappy things

Far away – as far at least
Lies the valley as the day
All things lovely – are not they
One and all, too far away?

Thereabout which Time hath said
Shall not be interpreted:
But  “the valley Nis” at best
Is “the valley of unrest”

b.   The Hirsute Hair Shirt
The First instrumental interlude, featuring our Very Special Guest, the Ozark  Mountain duo, Hither & Yon. Take it away, boys!

c.   Everything Like Nothing Else
Around the stormy Hebrides –
No wind in Heaven, and clouds to fly

Rustling everlastingly
Thro’ the terror-stricken sky

And Helen, like thy human eye
Low on earth, some violets lie

Nearer Heaven, lilies wave
Banner-like, all above a grave

PART II
________________________________________
a.   Helen, Queen Of The Skies
‘Twas noontide of summer,
And mid-time of night;
And stars, in their orbits,
Shone pale, thro’ the light
Of the brighter, cold moon,
‘Mid planets her slaves
Herself in the Heavens,
Her beam on the waves

I gazed awhile
On her cold smile;
Too cold – too cold for me –
There pass’d, as a shroud,
A fleecy cloud,
And I turned away to thee,
Proud Evening Star,
In thy glory afar,
And dearer thy beam shall be;
For joy to my heart
Is the proud part
Thou bearest in Heaven at night

b.
For what to them availeth it to know
That Truth is Falsehood – or that Bliss is Woe?
Sweet was their death – with them to die was rife
With the last ecstasy of their statiate life
How far from Hell!

But two: they fell: Heven no grace imparts
To those who hear not for their beating hearts

Sweet was that error – sweeter still in death –
Sweet was that error – ev’n with us the breath
How far from Hell!

c.
She ceas’d – and buried then her burning cheek
Abash’d, amid the lilies there, to seek

A sound of silence on the startled ear
Which dreamy poets name “the music of the sphere”

d.   Mercury Retrograde, Phase I
[Instrumental solo 1]

e.   Awaken The Dreamer, Part I: Alpha State
Arise! From your sleeping

f.   Mecury Retrograde, Phase II

[Instrumental solo 2]

g.   Awaken The Dreamer, Part II: Beta State

[words]
Title: Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
Post by: blue on February 20, 2014, 10:26:05 AM
What I can hear of it sounds beautiful, but for some reason the computer I'm on will only play about three minutes of it before it resets to the start. 
Title: Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
Post by: Plenum n Heather on February 20, 2014, 11:45:38 AM
Thanks for trying! Sometimes SoundCloud's streaming can be wonky w long tracks. It played for me, so I would suggest trying again if you find the time. :)
Title: Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
Post by: gwEm on February 20, 2014, 12:31:44 PM
Loads of ideas there. Its really good stuff Ben. The guitars in particular are really well done, perfect vintage tones, but well produced and clear.

I do have a couple of thoughts on it, but I'll listen to it a few more times and send you a PM.
Title: Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
Post by: gwEm on February 20, 2014, 12:33:19 PM
I also like the organ sounds
Title: Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
Post by: Plenum n Heather on February 20, 2014, 01:14:26 PM
Thanks for listening!
Edit: and looking forward to your comments. :)
Title: Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
Post by: gwEm on February 20, 2014, 02:15:25 PM
It was an enjoyable listen - 4 stars out of 5

Cool to hear the results of your work, some of which we've seen with comments and posts here on this forum.
Title: Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
Post by: Plenum n Heather on February 20, 2014, 04:00:56 PM
It was an enjoyable listen - 4 stars out of 5

Cool to hear the results of your work, some of which we've seen with comments and posts here on this forum.
Thanks! I know it's a big enchilada to take in one go; wait til side 2 is complete and it grows to its full length! (About 52 minutes long) :)
Title: Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
Post by: Plenum n Heather on February 21, 2014, 12:14:46 PM
FYI, this was mixed in real time in the analogue domain with a combination of plugins (some, mostly EQ) and outboard gear (lots). Master out from the desk was fed back into the interface and recorded as a stereo track and then mixed down as a 24/44.1 stereo wav file in real time.
Title: Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
Post by: Plenum n Heather on February 24, 2014, 01:47:52 PM
My primitive mixing setup:

(http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq33/Phantom_Isle/Mixing%20Feb%202014/photo7_zps0fc6bc49.jpg) (http://s431.photobucket.com/user/Phantom_Isle/media/Mixing%20Feb%202014/photo7_zps0fc6bc49.jpg.html)
Title: Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
Post by: forestcaver on February 24, 2014, 09:54:56 PM
Sounds really good - very Porcupine Tree.... ??? (in a good way)
Title: Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
Post by: Plenum n Heather on February 25, 2014, 03:26:49 AM
Thanks for listening! And the positive comment. I do, indeed, enjoy Porcupine Tree...
Title: Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
Post by: forestcaver on February 25, 2014, 09:34:04 PM
I like them too :-)  It's really good - lovely tones and sounds....
Title: Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
Post by: Alex on March 04, 2014, 10:01:16 PM
Very nice, I have to say the singing is really well done as well. Here and there it could be a bit more to the point, but I get it that this music style "takes it time".
Title: Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
Post by: Plenum n Heather on March 04, 2014, 11:53:28 PM
Thanks for being patient with it!

You are correct, there is a certain discipline required while you wait for the 'punch lines'.
And this piece still has another 30 minutes to go! :)