Cheers for the reply Searcher and i appreciate that you gave it a listen and critqued it. Thanks for taking the time.
Im listening to the track as im typing this as i type as I havent listened to the track for quite a while to try and get fresh ears on it.
I agree definetely on the bass isnt loud enough, my problem was that the bottom end was getting muddy but ill try and rectify that. I also agree with the lead guitar i will pan the lead to the other side.
I listened to the sweeps again and I dont think they are out of time. I compared it to the tab i wrote for it and they are exactly the same. I think they do sound quite weird in a way.
Anyway, thanks for listening!