New original that im writing (miracle man bridge)

[Transcend]

Well i original started writing this witha very big load vibe to it but it kinda progressed into well, i dunno whatever it is now still a tad loady in places.

The structuring is not what it will be on the final this is just a bunch of the riffs that i came up with thrown together quickly so that i could get a better idea of what it would sound like.

Anyways let me know what you think.

http://www.infocus.ho8.com/media/New%20mix_mixdown.mp3

[_tom_]

I like the riffage apart from the pinch harmonic bits, they sort of ruin the heavy flow for me, unless thats what you were going for.

[Transcend]

No they just kinda happened and i stuck with them.

I was thinking of removing them myself as they are very sudden and as you said ruin the flow.

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Ive added some harmonies in and EQ'd the drums a bit more to how i want them to sound on the final once ive finished writing it.

http://www.infocus.ho8.com/media/New%20mix_mixdown2.mp3

Keep me updated with comments, also if anyone has an idea of where it should go next id be really appreciative of a general idea as ive hit a complete block now.

[Vlad89]

I love both versions. Can you send me the tab for it?

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Ill just have to check with the rest of the band whether we are gonna use it or not.

But anyway heres a more complete version.

http://www.infocus.ho8.com/media/Mix_mixdown.mp3