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Plenum n Heather

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A year of hard work and a 21 hour mix session to get Side 1 of my upcoming album complete!! But it's done and mastered now. Here's the rough assembly of Side 1.

This is a LOOONG one, so get a beer or something before playing it. :)

https://soundcloud.com/as-follows/the-eye-of-fire-and-fear-side


Lyrics -- (still working out some of the subtitles)

THE EYE OF FIRE AND FEAR
PART  I
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a.   The Valley
Far away – as far at least
Lies the valley as the day
Down within the golden East
One and all, too far away

It is called the valley Nis:
And a Syriac tale there is
Satan’s dart
Angel wings
Broken heart
Unhappy things

Far away – as far at least
Lies the valley as the day
All things lovely – are not they
One and all, too far away?

Thereabout which Time hath said
Shall not be interpreted:
But  “the valley Nis” at best
Is “the valley of unrest”

b.   The Hirsute Hair Shirt
The First instrumental interlude, featuring our Very Special Guest, the Ozark  Mountain duo, Hither & Yon. Take it away, boys!

c.   Everything Like Nothing Else
Around the stormy Hebrides –
No wind in Heaven, and clouds to fly

Rustling everlastingly
Thro’ the terror-stricken sky

And Helen, like thy human eye
Low on earth, some violets lie

Nearer Heaven, lilies wave
Banner-like, all above a grave

PART II
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a.   Helen, Queen Of The Skies
‘Twas noontide of summer,
And mid-time of night;
And stars, in their orbits,
Shone pale, thro’ the light
Of the brighter, cold moon,
‘Mid planets her slaves
Herself in the Heavens,
Her beam on the waves

I gazed awhile
On her cold smile;
Too cold – too cold for me –
There pass’d, as a shroud,
A fleecy cloud,
And I turned away to thee,
Proud Evening Star,
In thy glory afar,
And dearer thy beam shall be;
For joy to my heart
Is the proud part
Thou bearest in Heaven at night

b.
For what to them availeth it to know
That Truth is Falsehood – or that Bliss is Woe?
Sweet was their death – with them to die was rife
With the last ecstasy of their statiate life
How far from Hell!

But two: they fell: Heven no grace imparts
To those who hear not for their beating hearts

Sweet was that error – sweeter still in death –
Sweet was that error – ev’n with us the breath
How far from Hell!

c.
She ceas’d – and buried then her burning cheek
Abash’d, amid the lilies there, to seek

A sound of silence on the startled ear
Which dreamy poets name “the music of the sphere”

d.   Mercury Retrograde, Phase I
[Instrumental solo 1]

e.   Awaken The Dreamer, Part I: Alpha State
Arise! From your sleeping

f.   Mecury Retrograde, Phase II

[Instrumental solo 2]

g.   Awaken The Dreamer, Part II: Beta State

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« Last Edit: February 20, 2014, 02:14:05 AM by Plenum n Heather »

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Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
« Reply #1 on: February 20, 2014, 10:26:05 AM »
What I can hear of it sounds beautiful, but for some reason the computer I'm on will only play about three minutes of it before it resets to the start. 
cry HAVOC!! and let slip the pigs of war!!!

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Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
« Reply #2 on: February 20, 2014, 11:45:38 AM »
Thanks for trying! Sometimes SoundCloud's streaming can be wonky w long tracks. It played for me, so I would suggest trying again if you find the time. :)

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Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
« Reply #3 on: February 20, 2014, 12:31:44 PM »
Loads of ideas there. Its really good stuff Ben. The guitars in particular are really well done, perfect vintage tones, but well produced and clear.

I do have a couple of thoughts on it, but I'll listen to it a few more times and send you a PM.
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Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
« Reply #4 on: February 20, 2014, 12:33:19 PM »
I also like the organ sounds
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Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
« Reply #5 on: February 20, 2014, 01:14:26 PM »
Thanks for listening!
Edit: and looking forward to your comments. :)
« Last Edit: February 20, 2014, 01:53:23 PM by Plenum n Heather »

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Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
« Reply #6 on: February 20, 2014, 02:15:25 PM »
It was an enjoyable listen - 4 stars out of 5

Cool to hear the results of your work, some of which we've seen with comments and posts here on this forum.
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Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
« Reply #7 on: February 20, 2014, 04:00:56 PM »
It was an enjoyable listen - 4 stars out of 5

Cool to hear the results of your work, some of which we've seen with comments and posts here on this forum.
Thanks! I know it's a big enchilada to take in one go; wait til side 2 is complete and it grows to its full length! (About 52 minutes long) :)

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Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
« Reply #8 on: February 21, 2014, 12:14:46 PM »
FYI, this was mixed in real time in the analogue domain with a combination of plugins (some, mostly EQ) and outboard gear (lots). Master out from the desk was fed back into the interface and recorded as a stereo track and then mixed down as a 24/44.1 stereo wav file in real time.

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Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
« Reply #9 on: February 24, 2014, 01:47:52 PM »
My primitive mixing setup:


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Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
« Reply #10 on: February 24, 2014, 09:54:56 PM »
Sounds really good - very Porcupine Tree.... ??? (in a good way)

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Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
« Reply #11 on: February 25, 2014, 03:26:49 AM »
Thanks for listening! And the positive comment. I do, indeed, enjoy Porcupine Tree...

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Re: The Eye Of Fire And Fear, side 1 -- final mix/master (prog rock content)
« Reply #12 on: February 25, 2014, 09:34:04 PM »
I like them too :-)  It's really good - lovely tones and sounds....

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Very nice, I have to say the singing is really well done as well. Here and there it could be a bit more to the point, but I get it that this music style "takes it time".
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Thanks for being patient with it!

You are correct, there is a certain discipline required while you wait for the 'punch lines'.
And this piece still has another 30 minutes to go! :)