I'm not very good @ critising, but if you want a reply at least, here goes:
In Her Eyes:
1. GOOD lyrics!
2. Bass was good but to me, I think you could do something more with it.
3. None of it sounded like ass.
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September:
Sadly, this is my least favourite for the vocals. The solo was good, and the intro reminded me of Nirvana, lol..