new demo up on myspace (miracle man)

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i was really unsure as whether to post this or not as ive worked hard on writining it.

But in the end i decided negative criticiism is  a great tool to help improve on what i already have,

So be as brutally honest as you can be

i arent 100% happy with my tone but thats because of the lack of anything other than my laney & a pc mic to record and its  shitety laney hardcore max.

anyways the song is called

End of days and its on the bands myspace.

http://www.myspace.com/transcenduk

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I don't see anything at all wrong with the tone per se.  Sounds really nice to me, pretty thick and saturated.  I might say a tad more low end - a la 450-750 Hrz boost (NOT MUCH!!!) - but don't overdo it as you have everything nicely set, even the drums blend REALLY well.  The only thing i am not so sure about is the vocals, you kind of have a Ron Royce thing going on there, just less Switzerlandy and MUCH less dynamic.

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I don't see anything at all wrong with the tone per se.  Sounds really nice to me, pretty thick and saturated.  I might say a tad more low end - a la 450-750 Hrz boost (NOT MUCH!!!) - but don't overdo it as you have everything nicely set, even the drums blend REALLY well.  The only thing i am not so sure about is the vocals, you kind of have a Ron Royce thing going on there, just less Switzerlandy and MUCH less dynamic.

im amazed i didnt think i'd get one postive comment about the tone. I'll have a play around where you said.

I'm happy with the vocals i think they fit very well.

I'm glad the drums are fitting better as i spent a hell of a lot of time EQ'ing and messing around with the different files to get it to all fit together