i cant say i am a fan of the finish, i agree with nfe... normal sparkle or solid colour would work better
but i like the details>
i like the fact you didnt feel the need to shove a fuzz factory in it and i like the fact its a more usable version of a manson/bellamy guitar that would suit more players than a straight up copy
and i like the fact you did something that would turn a lot of people off.... i felt similar about Roo's guitar in some respects- lots of great features but clearly it would never be for everyone!