Pretty crushing tone. That said, my biggest complaint is the bit of mud and it seems like there is a bit of body missing to the whole song. Am i right in thinking that the drums are processed? They certainly sound it, so i would use more verb on the snare track. I would EQ the fvck out of the kick drum (its barely there): i would raise the mids and treble on the attack, and give it a pretty good make-over on the low-end - even the cymbals could use a touch of verb because they decay far too quickly in the mix.
As for the guitars, there is a definite tone there, however, there is very little body to the overall mix - it feels, for lack of a better term, limp. There is not a rich fullness of sound. There are several things that could be done pre- and post-mix here: 1) Bring up the 1k - 4k range a dB or two on the guitar tracks. Though, like you said these were all doubled, or, in some cases sextupled, so another thing to do is to push some tracks and not others. 2) Also, it feels like you didn't pan much of anything, this could help massively. And since you have so many damn guitar tracks just spread them all over the board, the drums could use it too; everything seems to be pushed to the front with the drums. (of course, i am listening on my macbook speakers :roll:). 3) lastly, you could EQ the final mix track and bring up the 250 - 750 range maybe 1k and a touch of the 8k.
These are all just suggestions of course. Interesting track, some parts were pretty good, others sort of generic, but you gots da good dissonance goin on dere brotha'! :)
